Serendipity Blues

Mehhh; 6/10 mainly because I've never watched House before.

Fail

I absolutely loved the ending of your poem, I did. The increasingly smaller line lengths added a desperation to the piece that really helps the reader to understand what the ...

I agree with the reformatting of the poem - by doing this it'd be a lot easier to read and it'd flow better. Plus, as I was reading through it, ...

No punctuation? Think it over - if you use the right kind of variety it can help to make your flow even better! Sorry I can't give any advice on ...

Much obliged if you reviewed this . Thankyooou!

Oh, could you please review for me. It's something new! Thank yooou!

I'd be much obliged if you could review this for me. Thank yooou in advance!

Hmmm it's a nice feel good poem but it's a bit garbled in the sense that you squash a lot of words into the lines and it messes with the ...

Thanks once again for tips on how to improve - I promise I'll stop bugging you all soon ;D I've chosen you as my little dwarf elders, but feel free ...

I dont see much of a haiku in there really - I'm not an expert in the field but I like to read them because they can pack so many ...

Wow - In this I didn't think about images as such. I thought a lot about how it would sound if it was a piece of music. And wait for ...

Seen as though there's so much going on - thank you everyone for welcoming me - I may as well reply, although I'm not sure any of you will realise ...

'Ellor. I've been a member on this site before and gotten my stuff published in first journal, but I'd prefer to say that I was just plain and simple - ...